Class Essays

Spencer Law
Professor Candia
English 102
Short Story
            “The Lottery” by Shirley Jackson is a very interesting story, especially because she misleads her readers in thinking that a lottery is suppose to result positively, but actually it was written in a negative perspective. As the reader, we can imagine from the title that someone is the chosen one in receiving the award; however, Shirley writes the story from a positive setting to a negative setting. She writes this story from the third person objective leaving us clueless about the character’s feelings. Lastly, she makes the slightest change of tone throughout her story.
            The narrator of "The Lottery" is extremely detached from the story. It does not allow us as readers to identify the characters' feelings or thoughts. The narrator constantly mentions the process of the lottery, “The people of…” (Jackson 258), which further leads us to the shocking ending. Our only indications of “The Lottery” are that villagers acting in such nervousness, rather than from their thoughts. Using “Bartleby the Scrivener” by Herman Melville as a contrast, its point of view is from a first person objective. Melville's choice of narrator is from the lawyer point of view allowing us to get close to Bartleby, but still needing to identify him. As we continue to read, we can quickly identify the feelings of the narrator as we also identify that Bartleby is struck with an innate and incurable disorder, “suffering from perplexity and distress of mind” (Melville 15) leading to a tragic ending.
            The setting of “The Lottery” starts off in a temporary setting with the narrator describing a typical sunny day where the children are off from school, how flowers give off their scent, and nevertheless, “the grass was richly green.” (Jackson 258). As the author brings a new setting of the villagers gathering for the lottery and piling up pebbles to as big as rocks, we shortly can feel that this is no longer a joyful story, but instead a uprising rage with sorrow. However, in “Bartleby”, the author gives us a strong understanding of where the story takes place in a law office on Wall Street in New York during the mid-19th century. Melville writes about a character that is deeply in trouble and faces to reject all help from his surroundings rather than Mrs. Hutchinson in “The Lottery” who receives no help of whatsoever.
            As readers, we go from reading about a small village on a nice sunny summer day to witnessing the villagers executing a member of their own without the lightest change in tone of the author in “The Lottery”. A short story that contradicts itself to this kind of tone would be “Bartleby the Scrivener.” For this specific story, the author changes the narrator’s tone as he is telling the story as first person objective. Throughout the story, we strongly identify with the narrator and see Bartleby feeling pathetic and a little frightening.
            Furthermore, besides contrasting the setting, point of view, and tone of “The Lottery” and “Bartleby”, we can clearly conclude that both authors characterize their character in two very different ways. Jackson leaves us with no information except about the lottery to something so dreadful throughout the ending, while Melville, who provides us with detailed information about his characters.

Works Cited
 Kennedy, X.J, and Dana Gioia. Backpack Literature: An Introduction to Fiction, Poetry, Drama, and Writing. Fourth Edition. Boston, Columbus, Indianapolis, New York, San Francisco, Upper Saddle River, Amsterdam, Cape Town, Dubai, London, Madrid, Milan, Munich, Paris, Montreal, Toronto, Delhi, Mexico City, Sao Paulo, Sydney, Hong Kong, Seoul, Singapore, Taipei, Tokyo: Pearson, 2012. Print.

Melville, Herman. Bartleby and Benito Cereno. New York: Dover Publications, Inc. 1990. Print.



 Poetry Essay
            Emily Dickson, a poet from the 1800s usually writes her works about death. Although, she wrote many poems, only eighteen were published. Poems such as “Because I could not stop for death” were unique because of the theme she writes with, mortality. Not knowing to write in proper English shocked the reader even more. One would question why Dickson is doing this, mainly to introduce her uniqueness with poetry.
            Morality, used in “Because I could not stop for Death” defines the speaker’s attitude towards her death and what the actual day of her death was like. Dickson images a picture of the day that doesn’t seem too far from ordinary with always having death along her side. She shows no sign of being scared of death and seems to accept it.
            On the other hand, she writes the symbolism. Throughout this particular poem, she uses quite a few; as she mentions about the carriage in the first stanza, which death and her rides towards their final passage to death. The carriage is symbolizing the transportation to the afterlife.
            Another symbolism is the sunset. She mentions the sunset in the third stanza after mentioning that she passed the middle of her life, labor and leisure. The sunset is symbolizing that she have been out for a long period of time and it is getting dark and cold. There is not much time left as to when they approach their final designation, death.
            Furthermore, Dickson’s poetry defines morality leaving her readers in thought of, do what you possibly can because death is always with you. There isn’t a time that you would know what happens the next second. Basically Dickson informs us to enjoy life and accept death as a natural stage of life.

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